CAN SOME PLEASE HELP ME WITH THE PURDUE ESSAY!!!!

Hello, so I was writing the Purdue essay and wrote about the curriculum and how it would help my interests in the class, but in terms of outside the class, I just said that the education will allow me to impact my community and world as they provide a global education. Can someone pls read the essay to make sure that I answered the topic, and if not can you suggest improvements.

Topic: How will opportunities at Purdue support your interests, both in and out of the classroom? (Respond in 100 words or fewer.)*

I’m applying to the College of Science

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So what did you end up saying?