Can somebody rate my answer to essay 1 on the app???

<p>Hah, i wasn't questioning its validity. I was just jealous^.^
My school is like...eh. But my CLASS are like...insane scholary people. My friend graduated early, so she was ranked with the seniors when we were juniors. And she has previously been like...one hundred something. And when she moved up, she was in the top ten.</p>