<p>So I see that I have to make my essay 300 words, cut all that lame crap I wrote, make it formal, don't us "you", and more. Thank you to all who responded. Now my question is what interest then should I really adress in my essay. I have the second essay covered with my hospital volunteering and internship, but the first essay concerns me.</p>
<p>What should I talk about from this list of interests I have compiled:</p>
<p>Poker- Play all the time, fun, strategy, blah
Pool- Fun, Blah, Blah
I like listening to music so could I just include a line or two about that?
I guess I could say I like biology and stuff, but how should I go about talking about it?
I play basketball with friends
Nothing else really, could I at least write a "good" essay with this stuff?</p>
<p>I have my hospital stuff, maybe I can include just alittle of that for my accomplishments, but I can't really think of any other accomplishments, can somebody give me a list of generic accomplishments that I may have done and can include.</p>
<p>THANK YOU TO ALL</p>