Can someone be brutally honest with my essay?

College Essays
1

I’m wrote an essay that colleges might hate or love but I feel like it would definitely go either way so I’d love some help from you guys. I’ll pm the essay to those interested.

2

I’ll have a look xD

3

Yes, I will take a look

4

I’ll have a look! Promise to be honest

5

I’ll take a look at it.