Can someone critique my essay due today plz only 300 words

[yagrammy]

<p>St. Lawrence supplement essay how spent my past two summer vacations</p>

<p>Really appreciate any help</p>

[i-ask-you-tell]

<p>If you PM me, I will give you my email address.</p>

[nicole5178]

<p>Sure, PM me if you still need someone to proof it.</p>