<p>I need someone to help me ASAP please! It's very personal but I really need someone to tell me what's wrong with it and what it needs. Thank you so much.</p>
<p>I'll help you out.</p>
<p>I'll critique as well</p>
<p>I'm jumping onto the helpwagon.</p>
<p>I'll take a look</p>
<p>thanks for your help please respond ASAP</p>