Can someone critique my essay?

<p>Hey everyone,</p>

<p>Can someone read my essay for content and probably grammar too?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Hey I’ll read it over. as long as you allow me to be a little harsh with thee corrections haha</p>

<p>I will take a look at it!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look</p>

<p>I’d be happy to help</p>

<p>PM it to me and I’ll get back to you within a few days. Also feel free to ask specific questions or let me know of things you are especially concerned with if you want to so that I can make certain that my critique focuses on the issues that are most important to you.</p>

<p>PM and I can get back to you by tomorrow.</p>

<p>Sure I’ll get back to you very soon.</p>

<p>Same here.
I am more concentrated on the overall aspect, though, and not grammar.
Good luck/ -pm it if you want.</p>

<p>PM it and I will proofread and provide thorough feedback.</p>