Can someone edit my supplement essay for University of Michigan?

<p>The question is "Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual degree programs) to which you are applying at the University of Michigan. How would that curriculum support your interests? (500 words maximum)." Please let me know if my essay answers the question and if I should add something else to it that makes it sound better.</p>

<p>where is the essay?</p>