Can someone grade my practice sat essay?

<p>Hi everyone,
I just took a practice sat, and as you all know, you can't calculate a definite writing score without factoring in an essay score. Can you all help to give me some ballpark idea of where the essay I wrote was? Feel free to include any tips for improvement. I know there are mistakes. By the way, the essay I wrote was two lines short from being two full pages when I wrote it on paper. I also didn't put any spaces between paragraphs because I heard(on here, somewhere) that graders see that as a negative thing. Is that true? If you would like to take a look at it, feel free to reply.
Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll grade yours if you grade mine. Here’s my thread:</p>

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