SAT Essay (can you... grade mine?)

<p>I needed to write a practice SAT-W essay for hw for English class today, but my teacher is only checking for completion, and I don't think she likes me very much, so I'm afraid to ask her after class. I'm curious about what I would get with it, because the only time I've taken the SATs before (in 8th grade, while half sleeping through the Writing Section - why first?) I only got an 8 on the essay. Would anybody be kind enough to assess my essay? (PM me)</p>