Can someone help edit my essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Stanford University
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<p>If you're willing to read my essay I will send you it via pm. Thank you very much!</p>

<p>It's my commonapp personal statement by the way :]</p>

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<p>Send it over, i’ll look over it and give you some feedback</p>

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<p>alright sent!</p>

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<p>Sent back! :D</p>

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<p>Thanks a lot Bumbulbi. Anyone else willing to take a look?</p>

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<p>I’m willing to read it and suggest feedback!</p>

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<p>Ill read and help!</p>

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<p>I will critique it for you. :)</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll try my best to critique the essay :-)</p>