Can someone help me edit my college essay?

[lostam007]

<p>I need help editing it so if you could, i can pm it to you and you can help me. thank you so much!</p>

[Marisashana]

<p>I’ll take a look at it!</p>

[hoopser77]

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

[happygirl123]

<p>PM it over and I’ll read it and critique it :)</p>

[powersoftware]

<p>I’ll read it! PM it to me!</p>

[anu1995]

<p>me too if youll read mine as well!!</p>