Can someone help me with my Tufts Supplemental Essays

<p>I'm not sure if these short responses are good enough for what Tufts is looking for, any help is appreciated. Thanks!</p>

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<li>Which aspects of Tufts' curriculum or undergraduate experience prompt your application? In short: ''Why Tufts?'' (50-100 words) </li>
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<li>Tufts - A university committed to excellence and the prosperity of intellectuality; an ethnically and socioeconomically diverse environment and culture; a breeding ground for future leaders and artistic creators; a place where homosexuality is accepted. At Tufts, I will become a leader and explore a vast world of art. Most importantly, I will be able to be myself and contribute to the diverse society in which Tufts is comprised of. </li>
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<li>There is a Quaker saying: ''Let your life speak.'' Describe the environment in which you were raised--your family, home, neighborhood or community--and how it influenced the person you are today. (200-250 words) </li>
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<li>I am a burning passion for art, a desire to know, a complex idea streaming from a creative mind, a persevering force in the heart of a swimmer, and individuality’s battle against the norm, all encompassed in the body of a 5’ 10” Hispanic male.</li>
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<li>For some, it's politics or sports or reading. For others, it may be researching solar power fuel cells or arranging hip-hop mash-ups. What makes you tick? (200-250 words)</li>
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<li>I like to pick up a paintbrush and leave my heart on the canvas.</li>
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