<p>I recently revised an older essay, only to have it exceed the 500 word limit, at 700 some words. Personally, I like my content, but i need to do some major trimming. Would anyone be willing to offer some advice/corrections? Any and at all help is greatly appreciated :). I plan to apply to UPenn, VTech, Georgetown U, Georgia Tech, UMBC, UMD, Towson, and RIT</p>
<p>I can try to help you; pm it to me</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>