Can Someone Please Read my Common App Essay?

<p>The title says it all but I won't say which category it falls under. I'd like to leave that to the reader to decide to see if my essay falls under the topic I actually change. Thank you very much for those who read my essay. I really appreciate it :D </p>

<p>Also, of there’s any revision which is necessary, can you please point it out. Thank you.</p>

<p>i"ll read it if you post :)</p>

<p>Would it be alright if PM it to you and to anyone else interested? It’s a little personal</p>

<p>@LGLDR3286‌ I would strongly advise against posting it here. It could be plagiarized by just about anyone.</p>

<p>And, only send your essay to credible posters. Clearly @BCnursinghopeful‌ is a new poster and therefore likely to steal your sensitive information. This has happened countless time on CC thus far. Be very careful. </p>

<p>Yeah, I read the rules and knew I shouldn’t post it here but I guess I forgot about credible posters. Thank you for reminding me, you saved me a lot of trouble</p>

<p>new poster but ive already submitted applications, i dont need to plagiarize. if you dont feel comfortable sharing it i understand but if you Pm it ill be happy to reead it :)</p>