<p>I love the subject of my essay, but it is very "rough" and needs a lot of tweaking. I am applying to some better colleges as well as a few that are not so selective. This essay is risky, and I want to make sure that it is not too risky. I am willing to PM it. Thanks!</p>
<p>sure!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like.</p>
<p>thank you!</p>
<p>I re-wrote it and I am hoping for more opinions before I send it to my teacher for editing! Thanks! </p>
<p>I can take a look at it if you’d like!</p>
<p>Sorry TheFellowMello, but your post count is very low and you seem to only post in this forum. Your intentions may be good, but you have all the warning signs of plagiarizing intentions. </p>
<p>Sure. I’ll be happy to help</p>
<p>I’d love to look at it if you need another pair of eyes. Just make sure too many changes from other people doesn’t eliminate your voice!</p>
<p>If you still need someone to look it over, I can help you out 
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<p>Those who have helped so far have been great! Any new sets of eyes would be extremely helpful!</p>
<p>I indeed have eyes.</p>
<p>I’m able to help, just send it over</p>
<p>I would be glad to help :)</p>
<p>I can help, but I finished my common app and have it edited already. I need to finish the supplement for my EA schools. If you need help let me know, but I’m a rising senior so if you think thats risky you don’t have to send it.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look, pm me.</p>
<p>I’ll help! I love editing papers and helping people out with their writing. </p>
<p>I can help as well shoot me a PM!</p>
<p>I would be willing to help as well. :)</p>
<p>I can try to help!</p>