Can someone please read my essay and help!

<p>I am applying ED and need everything in to my school in 2 weeks. Im an average student and an average writer. This is my first draft, so the more help the better!</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I will</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me</p>