Can someone please read my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hello,
I need someone to read my essay and comment. I am new to this so not sure if I am asking correctly.</p>

<p>I followed the recommendations of the consolidated readers list, and PM'd 5 or 6 people from the list but nobody answered. I later got one answer from my original post.
Hopefully I didn't request them to read out of line. I apologize if I did.</p>

<p>Someone please let me know if I am asking wrong. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>LookingForward91</p>

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<p>I'll do it, since you're desperate o_o</p>

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<p>Done. I hope I was able to help!!</p>

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<p>You're awesome, thanks!</p>

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<p>I can read your essay if you need help.</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

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<p>On its way to you both, thanks so much!</p>

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<p>Done and good luck! =]</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to read... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>