Can Someone Please Read My Essays? (You get virtual cookies!)

<p>I'm sort of totally freaking out since I had my parents read my essays, but they're not native English speakers/don't know anything about college admissions so I don't really trust they're opinion (they liked them but...) Also, my counselors weren't that helpful either. So I'd really love for someone to read my essays and critique them.</p>

<p>Right now, I have my UChicago supplement (find x), my why UChicago, and my common app essay. Just reading one would still be lovely and a huge help! (I think I'm most insecure about my why UChicago and common app right now...)</p>

<p>I don't mean to be annoyingly picky, but only people who have already gotten into college and/or adults please. =)</p>