Hello!! I would really appreciate if someone could review some of my essays and give me honest feedback! I have 2 essays that I would like assistance with. I don’t have very many people that are able to help me with them in real life so advice would really be welcomed! 
I’d be happy to, if you still need people
clarification These essays are for the University of Michigan. I would like some help with the community essay as well as the Why essay
I just submitted my app there today, I can help!