Can someone please read my Wannabe Metaphorical Common App essay?

[MrSimpleSimple]

<p>It's for the common app. I'm stating my opinions in order to implicitly suggest the kind of person I am.</p>

[ZahidMaix]

<p>I’ll try my best.</p>

[emxxxm]

<p>pm me~I’ll read it and make some comments</p>