<p>This is probably the 3rd draft of the essay. I've caught most of the obvious mistakes and errors, but if anyone could give me any suggestions feedback or edits it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!</p>
<p>PM me, i’ll be glad to read it :)</p>
<p>This is probably the 3rd draft of the essay. I've caught most of the obvious mistakes and errors, but if anyone could give me any suggestions feedback or edits it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!</p>
<p>PM me, i’ll be glad to read it :)</p>