<p>Hey everyone, can I get some people to re-read my common app essay and tell me what they think about it? It's only my first draft but I would like some feed back before editing it multiple times. PM me or post here if you're interested in helping. Thanks!</p>
<p>i’ll read if u want!</p>
<p>Anyone else willing to give me some feedback?</p>
<p>sure i can take a look</p>