Can someone please review my Dartmouth Supplement?

College Essays
1

<p>I will be really happy if you look over my supplement essay for Dartmouth.</p>

2

<p>Bump!
Anyone? </p>

3

<p>Yeah, I’ll read and critique if you still need it</p>

4

<p>I’m a Duke alumni interviewer and would be willing to read. Please send PM</p>