Can someone read my upenn supplement?!!

College Essays
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<p>Hi, can someone plz read my upenn supplement (constructive criticism). I would prefer if u were an alumni or already in college. Thanks!!!</p>

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<p>Hello - I’m a Duke alumni interviewer and would be willing. Send via PM</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it! PM me!</p>

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<p>@rbow10 r u in college??</p>