can someone proofread my essay for usc????

College Essays
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<p>PM me please :)</p>

<p>I need advice on how to make my essay more interesting. I'm using this for both USC, and one of my UC essays. My dad read both, and said my other UC essay was far more interesting than this one. So I need this one to be better!</p>

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<p>Sure, PM it to me and write both USC and UC prompt titles so I can help edit it for both.</p>