Can someone proofread my essay please? (:

College Essays
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<p>I know I have some grammar mistakes in there somewhere xD
I'd appreciate it! Thanks! (:</p>

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<p>i will :-)</p>

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<p>Bump~
Anyone else want to help?</p>

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<p>Ill proof read it, would you mind reading mine?</p>

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<p>Yea sure is it commonap ps ?</p>

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<p>ill give you my input. send it please</p>

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<p>I don’t mind reading it, shoot it over. I can give you some helpful advice.</p>