can someone proofread my essay?

[dvl2014]

<p>its at 648 word count, 2 less than limit if you can help proof read it please reply</p>

[kurz]

<p>I will read it …</p>

[mpewangy]

<p>yes, i’d like to read it.</p>

[lilygrdn12]

<p>I’d be happy to help you proofread it!</p>