Can someone proofread my UC Personal Statement essay? (Prompt #1)

College Essays
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PM me or post below and I will send you the essay. Thank you :slight_smile:

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Bummmmpppp

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Sure, PM me.

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Sure !

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Hi. I’d be glad to read it. If you have time, could you peer review what I wrote in my “Additional Comments” section of the personal statement?