<p>I was wondering if anyone would read it over and point out suggestions/corrections. It's pretty bad, so bad that it hurt my eyes while reading it.</p>
<p>No college essay can be bad. I would be happy to look it over. Just what promt are you doing on the common app, and what schools are you applying to? I can give you some tips and pointers depending on the colleges you are looking at.</p>
<p>I can help out but I’m sure it’s not that bad.</p>
<p>I’ll help you out! I’m a professional proofreader, and can check for grammar, punctuation, etc.</p>