<p>My sister is four years older than me so when she wrote her essay it could have been much longer. I find it fortunate to have a short essay since mine is only 450 words approx. It is about the death of one of my relatives, and how I tried to empathize with my family who knew him much better than I did. But I don't know if my essay even has a theme. There seems to be no point to it. It is a narrative and I feel like it is not really showing a lot of purpose. So if anyone could read it over please comment!</p>
<p>Thank you all for your help and for helping everyone else who come here for help!</p>