Can someone read my essay plz?

College Essays
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<p>Its a commonapp one . Can u read and give some feed backs?</p>

2

<p>Sure... PM.</p>

3

<p>i'll read it</p>

4

<p>yeah i'd be happy to critique.</p>

5

<p>yeah PM it</p>

6

<p>ok PM me...i'll try my best.</p>

7

<p>hey, send it to me as well. i'll be glad to read it.:D:D</p>

8

<p>I can offer my opinions on it too but only if your not applying to NYU/Cornell.</p>

9

<p>Sure, why not? Go ahead and PM it to me.</p>