Can someone read my essay?

<p>Hey guys, I was wondering if you some of you guys can look over my personal statement. I'm currently attending a community college and looking to transfer this fall to UCI, UCSD, or UCLA. I went to UCSB for a quarter before dropping out due to personal issues. This is a very important part of my life right now and I need to do as best as I can, so please!</p>

<p>Also, is it safe to be sending essays to others?</p>

<p>ill give u constructive criticism, send it over</p>

<p>ill take a look at it</p>