Would someone be willing to read and edit my essay?

<p>This is my personal statement for college application. planning on going to some UC. This is just a starting one so it is going to need alot of editing and possibly re-write on it. so just read it through an see what you guys think! THANK YOU! I will PM it to you if you are willing to read it</p>

<p>I’ll read it! I’ll give you my opinions and some thoughtful feedback.</p>