Can someone read my UC essays?

College Essays
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<p>Hi everyone! I was wondering if anyone can take a look at my UC essays, and give me some suggestions on how to improve it. Thanks~</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it if you want me to. PM me</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>PM me ill take a look</p>

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<p>pm me
i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'm happy to help readt it. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>i'd be happy to help, pm me</p>