<p>so far the people who have read it have told me that it sucks and is not going in the right direction. </p>
<p>would anyone like to edit/offer opinions please? :)</p>
<p>I'll read it for ya :)</p>
<p>i'll read it.</p>
<p>PM me, i can go over it</p>
<p>pm me. i'll take a look.</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>