Can someone read my UPenn Supplement?

I just finished the rough draft of my UPenn Supplement and I would really like another set of eyes to look at it! Will anyone be willing?!

The prompt is

How will you explore your intellectual and academic interests at the University of Pennsylvania? Please answer this question given the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying. (400-650 words)

sure, my student got into Penn dual degree program. PM me. The key is to make it specific to you. Research what courses or ECs they offer, and show how your ECs have something in common.

thank you! i pm’d you

My child got into Penn! I would love to help you out with your essay! PM me