Can someone read my USC essay please.

<p>Thomas Edison failed many times before successfully inventing the modern electric light bulb. He said, "If I find 10,000 ways something won't work, I haven't failed. I am not discouraged, because every wrong attempt discarded is another step forward." Reflect on an accomplishment you achieved in an unlikely way.</p>

<p>This is the prompt.</p>

<p>I would be very grateful if someone were to read over my essay.</p>

<p>I can ........ I need lots of FA as an international student, so universities are not in my list.........PM me if you would like</p>

<p>Another international; would read it if you pm or email me.</p>

<p>Anyone? 10 char</p>

<p>i'll critique yours if you critique mine.</p>

<p>ill critique...mail it here</p>

<p>I sent it.</p>

<p>I know.........</p>

<p>Could someone look over the grammar and structure real fast?</p>

<p>someone please? i'm going to submit soon.</p>

<p>i'm still here if u need help. :)</p>

<p>anyone else? I sent it to Resdred and he hasn't responded, I'm going to submit soon.</p>

<p>i sent it to u. hope you got it in time</p>