Can someone read over my Columbia Supplement essay please?

College Essays
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<p>I'll inbox you. The prompt first asked for you to list some favorite books you read for school/pleasure in the past year. I listed:</p>

<p>"Siddhartha" by Herman Hesse, "Letter from a Birmingham City Jail" by Dr. Martin Luther King Jr., "Ode to a Nightingale" by John Keats, "Ecce Homo" by Friedrich Nietzsche, "An Autobiography of Malcolm X" by Malcolm X and Alex Haley, "Essays and Aphorisms" by Arthur Schopenhauer, and "Walden and Civil Disobedience" by Henry David Thoreau.</p>

<p>Then it asked to list "...the films, concerts, shows, exhibits, lectures and other entertainments you enjoyed most in the past year." I listed: </p>

<p>"Art in the Streets" Urban Art Exhibit at the LA Museum of Contemporary Art with Shepard Fairey, "Flying Lotus" and "Animal Collective" concert at the Hollywood Bowl, Lecture received at the London School of Economics on the history English Politics, the release of Kendrick Lamar's "Section80" Album.</p>

<p>Then it asks for an essay on why you think they are important. Thats what I need read. Thanks, I really appreciate it :)</p>

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<p>I can read over yours, if you can help me with mine!</p>

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<p>I would be happy to help you. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>Your lists look diverse, which is good. And you list of movies/lectures/etc has a nice theme of art. Will you explain that somewhere else on your app?</p>

<p>If you need another set of eyes to look at your essay, feel free to pm me.</p>

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<p>Thanks guys. Would anyone else like to read it?</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. PM me</p>

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<p>Inbox me yours!</p>

<p>And can you check my rice short answer?</p>

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<p>for sure dude, you’ve got it</p>

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<p>I’ll read over it and make edits for you! What was your topic?</p>

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<p>I’d love to give it a read! PM me please and i’ll try and edit it for ya.</p>