Can someone read over my essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Johns Hopkins University
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<p>I just finished the first supplemental essay replying to the following prompt:
Johns Hopkins offers 50 majors across the schools of Arts & Sciences and Engineering. On this application, we ask you to identify one or two that you might
like to pursue here. Why did you choose the way you did? If you are undecided, why didn’t you choose? (If any past courses or academic experiences influenced
your decision, you may include them in your essay.)</p>

<p>Can someone PM me if willing to read my essay?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p><em>bump</em> 10char</p>

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<p>If you PM me, I will read and give my thought as soon as I can!</p>