Can someone review my essay about medicine?

<p>Applying to an early MD admit type program, and looking for feedback on my essay. Can I get any readers willing to give me a reaction/response, or any content edits? Thanks, in advance!</p>

<p>Sure…do you wanna send it in email form, or what?</p>

<p>Sure, thanks! Can I private message it to you, or can you give me your email address? Either way’s fine.</p>

<p>I can look at it if you’d like (I was accepted to UIC’s GPPA Medicine Program, if it helps).</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll private message it to you. Thanks! (if you’d prefer email, give me your email address)</p>

<p>I can read it if you would like.</p>

<p>PM it over and I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>Yes, I can read it! Also, I want to go into medicine too, so can you please read mine?</p>

<p>I would love to. PM me :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it and give feedback. PM it over.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I’m applying to a similar program, you can read mine as well. PM it.</p>

<p>I’ll help :slight_smile: I got a scholarship to attend a medicine conference, but I declined to do my research work the whole summer haha. PM if you’d like me to give feedback!</p>

<p>Pm it to me too! :)</p>

<p>i’ll read it send it over!</p>

<p>I would LOVE to read it! PM me? :)</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll take a look! My older sibling is in an early acceptance MD program</p>