Can someone review my essay?

College Essays
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I will PM genuine readers

2

I will offer a brief critique if you PM your essay to me.

3

Sure, PM it to me, I’ll be happy to help!

4

I will pass as I have not received anything from you.

5

sorry was offline, can you still review it?

6

Already have.

7

I’ll be happy to help, send em in!

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I can read too, if you still need help! Current Cornell student here.