Can someone review my essay?

I will PM genuine readers

I will offer a brief critique if you PM your essay to me.

Sure, PM it to me, I’ll be happy to help!

I will pass as I have not received anything from you.

sorry was offline, can you still review it?

Already have.

I’ll be happy to help, send em in!

I can read too, if you still need help! Current Cornell student here.