Can you grade my College Essay?

College Essays
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Hi everyone,
Can someone provide feedback on my essay, as deadlines are approaching soon? Thank you so much!

Prompt: The lessons we take from failure can be fundamental to later success. Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

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I can’t grade it but I can give you my opinion and give some possible edits if you’d like. Be sure not to emphasize failure but the lesson. Give them a reason to accept you!

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I’ll have a look :smiley:

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PM me your essay…I will provide my opinions

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I can take a look!

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Thanks so much @anatomymonster i’ll pm the essay to you