Can you guys please read my "What Don't You Know" Essay? (Brown)

<p>I already submitted it and I started the same thread in the Brown forum. I just want to get some more feedback and general comments. Its short, I promise!</p>

<p>pm me and i’ll read it!</p>

<p>oh i recently read a brown essay. maybe i can help you also?</p>

<p>thanks :] , anyone else?</p>