I don't know if this essay actually says anything

<p>It's for Brown's "what don't you know?" prompt. I like this essay, but I don't know if the point it's trying to make is very evident. Does anyone want to read/critique it?</p>

<p>I’ll read it. pm it over.</p>

<p>^ low post counts. beware O_O</p>

<p>I will if you want to pm it. My Brown essay is pretty out there as well, but I feel like it’s the sort of school that would appreciate that.</p>