<p>Yeah, the title isn't too enticing. At any rate, the subject is something somewhat interesting: PDA. My friend and I wrote an article about what pushes the limits, how it can be disrespectful, etc. We interviewed a teacher and quoted him too. I think it turned out well. I would like some feedback before I submit it.</p>
<p>If you're interested, I will PM it to you.</p>
<p>I gotta go now, but I'll be back in around an hour or so if no one else gives you feedback. Just pm it to me, but sorry if I don't get back to you until a couple of hours.</p>
<p>Ok, thanks. And do me a favor and be very honest. :)</p>
<p>You can PM it to me. I don't know how useful my comments would be though.</p>
<p>Anything helps. Even a plain old, "I like it."</p>
<p>I shall PM it to you.</p>
<p>Anyone else? :)</p>
<p>It's due tomorrow. If I sound desperate, it's because I am.</p>
<p>i'll read it for u. I write for the paper so it might help.</p>
<p>Thank you, kind soul. :D</p>
<p>Anyone else want to be my editor?</p>
<p>I love you.</p>
<p>im me if u want. I'll help u with ur article. I can really think of a good way to start ur aritcle.</p>
<p>B-u-m-p, baby.</p>
<p>I'll read it. I've read tons of college essays people have PMed me.</p>
<p>I'm the perspectives (aka opinion) editor of my school paper. I'd be happy to read it.</p>
<p>Would you still love me if I didnt give a damn about your article?</p>
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<p>Depends on what you look like but with your attitude, probably not.</p>
<p>And thanks for everybody who volunteered their constructive criticism. I turned it in and the opinion editor loved it. Said it had spunk and all that good stuff. I was pretty happy.</p>