Demographics
- international student applying from Canada
- public high school (graduating class size approx 350, only IB program is competitive)
- asian (Chinese) male
- no hooks
- not applying for financial aid
Intended Major
- business with an emphasis on finance
- applied to Vanderbilt for economics
- applied to NYU for NYU Stern Business w/Core Concentration
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- UW GPA: school doesn’t calculate (i was curious and i calculated it myself: 3.93)
- Weighted GPA: school doesn’t calculate (was curious as well: 4.33/5.0 including gym & leadership, 4.22/5.0 excluding gym & leadership)
- Class Rank: school doesn’t calculate
- Test Optional
Exam Results
- IB SL Mathematics Analysis & Approaches (took the exam M22): 7
- IB SL CS (M22): 7
Transcript Grades (the course name is in the parentheses; some courses have two names bc of my school board, but are ultimately the same IB course)
NOTE: my school converts IB grades into percentage grades. these grades are from my last reporting term, and i included my quarter grades i submitted to Vanderbilt. midterm grades for NYU not available yet, but should be continuing the upward trend.
I took all the possible IB courses I could take. School doesn’t let us choose; they arrange the courses in ‘course packages.’ Chose the one most related to my future career path.
LAST REPORTING TERM:
- IB SL French B: 88%
- IB SL Mathematics Analysis & Approaches (Advanced Functions): 100%
- IB SL Mathematics Analysis and Approaches (Calculus and Vectors) 100%
- IB SL CS (Intro to CS): 88%
- IB SL CS (CS Final): 98%
- IB HL English A Lang&Lit (English): 92%
- IB HL Psychology (Psychology): 97%
- IB HL Economics (Economics): 97%
QUARTER GRADES:
- IB HL English A Lang&Lit (English): 94%
- IB HL Psychology (Psychology): 96%
- IB HL Economics (Economics): 98%
- IB Theory of Knowledge: 96%
All grade 9 - 10 grades are A’s (90%+).
Awards
- Invited to the Kakehashi Project, an exchange program in Japan; met the Tokyo 2020 Winter Olympics Team Canada (INTERNATIONAL)
- 1st place in the provincial Japan Bowl competition; won all rounds in this Japanese language and culture competition (STATE/REGIONAL)
- Royal Conservatory of Music First Class Honours Level 8 Piano/Piano Theory (NATIONAL)
- Outstanding academic excellence for IB SL Mathematics A&A (SCHOOL)
- Honour Roll w/Distinction (90%+ average) (SCHOOL)
Extracurriculars
Head of Advertisement, Student Activity Council (gr. 9, 11, 12)
- organize, film and promote various school-wide events
- created inaugural Holiday Assembly and made $2400 for school dance because of my team’s promo
- added all the videos I made (including the Holiday Assembly) in my videography portfolio I sent to Vanderbilt
Percussion Section Leader, Wind Ensemble (gr. 9, 10, 11, 12)
- play the drums/xylophone in this advanced band
- lead sectionals to help other percussionists improve
- currently preparing for MusicFest Canada’s 51st national competition
- mentioned on my resume i submitted to Vanderbilt about my conductor nominating me to audition for the city’s senior band, and that I was accepted
Drummer and Choreographer, rock band (gr. 9, 11, 12)
- lead peers during rehearsals by planning breakdowns and choreographing stage movements
- perform in school-wide concerts, and tour other schools
- added a music portfolio in the resume i sent to Vanderbilt
Content Creator & YouTube Manager, National [name retracted] Charity (gr. 11, 12)
- create STEM-related TikToks
- original “How-To” series gained 10k views, inspired my peers
- develop promo plans for the YouTube channel
Social Media Coordinator, non-profit org in my community (gr. 9, 10, 11, 12)
- promote STEM workshops on Instagram and YouTube
- plan and film the [name retracted], a large conference held at UofT featuring Google, Amazon, etc.
Member (gr. 11), President (gr. 12) (gr. 11, 12) (Career-Oriented)
- chosen by FBLA Canada to lead the city’s community chapter
- recruit students from various high schools
- prepare the chapter to compete in the Canadian National Leadership Conference
Video Director and Software Developer, dance studio in my community (gr. 10, 11)
- directed, filmed, and edited a promotional video which is posted on their website
- designed and coded a registration application to simplify manual work
- added the promo vid in my videography portfolio in my resume I sent to Vanderbilt
Link Leader, Link Crew (gr. 10, 11, 12)
- nominated by teachers to be a Link Leader
- help students transition into high school; lead engaging activities and host school tours
Doubles Partner, Badminton (gr. 9, 11, 12) (JV/Varsity)
- practice skills and doubles strategies with my teammate
- co-host tryouts for the JV team
- currently training to play on the varsity team
Card Creator, non-profit org in my community (gr. 10, 11, 12)
- design motivational cards for cancer patients during the pandemic to instill positivity
- create around 5 handmade and virtual cards each month
Essays/LORs/Other
CommonApp Personal Statement: 9/10 (wrote about how videography is my way of telling stories w/personal growth; overcoming insecurities)
Vanderbilt Extracurricular Supplemental: 9/10 (wrote about how my drumming in the rock band not only fostered my love for music/performing, but also how it can radiate happiness to others esp. my friend who went thru difficult times; using drumming as a creative way to solve a problem, basically)
NYU Diversity Supplemental: 9/10 (wrote about how filming a promo video @ the dance studio opened up varying new perspectives, identities, and backgrounds – and how I’ve come to embrace that and how I will continue doing that at NYU)
Math teacher LOR (submitted to Vanderbilt): 8.5/10 (theme of spreading smiles on people’s faces)
CS teacher LOR (submitted to Vanderbilt and NYU): 9/10 (mentioned how i was only a handful of students in her 15+ years of teaching IB/gifted kids to show maturity of an adult and relentless drive for success)
Peer LOR (submitted to Vanderbilt and NYU): 9/10 (mentioned my connection with Taylor Swift’s drummer, my involvement in the Wind Ensemble with him [the peer who wrote the LOR], and my involvement in a school music committee as the Head of Photography that I didn’t touch upon in my app)
Counsellor LOR (submitted to Vanderbilt and NYU): 6.5 or 7/10 (said she spoke highly of me?)
Schools
Vanderbilt (ED2)
NYU (RD)
Final Thoughts
I understand how competitive these schools are and the added disadvantage as an international applicant. Keeping my hopes low. Thank you for your insight!