This is my stat! Please chance me for Cornell ILR!!! I am really passionate about balancing efficiency and worker’s well beings! I believe the assembly line system should be changed! and ILR is the place for me to study this kind of problems!
Ethnicity: Asian
Gender: Female
Location: Canada
College Class Year: 2020
High School: Public
High School Type: rarely sends grads to top schools
Academics:
GPA - Unweighted: 3.80
GPA - Weighted: 4.00
Class Rank: top 10% (I think I’m top 7 or 8%)
Class Size: 226
Scores:
SAT I Math: 770
SAT I Critical Reading: 700
SAT I Writing: 740
SAT II Math Level 2 (IIC): 770
SAT II Physics: 680
SAT II Chinese with Listening: 800
AP Psychology: 4
AP Human Geography: 4
AP Physics: 3
Extracurriculars:
Leadership positions:
president of a charitable society that donates clothes around the world) grade 9-12
I worked really hard to better my society. We have donated clothes in India, China and Canada.
president of a charity Club(grade 9-12)
president of Wold Vision Club(grade 9-12)
president and editor of Newspaper Club(grade 12)
Athletic Status - list sport and your level: softball team(grade9-12)
cross country(grade9-12)
track and field(grade 10)
Volunteer/Service Work:
Sunrise Senior Houses(grade9-12)
elections(grade9 and 11)
member of Key Club(grade10-12)
train club leaders(grade9-12)
work in McDonalds’s (grade 10-12)
choir(grade 9-12)
work in school cafe(11-12)
ORBIS Canada(9-11)
Honors and Awards:
softball city champion
softball second place
softball first place
Gauss Contest top 25%
Honour Roll every year
Piano Level 10
AP Scholars
Recommendation Letter:
Vice Principal: he did pretty well and I’d say it’s 8.5/10 decent
SS Teacher: she wrote a 10/10 letter
Physics Teacher: 10/10
someone who has witnessed myself finishing my charity project in India 10/10
McDonald’s manager: 10/10
Common app: I wrote about how my dream to better children’s lives started when I was 6, developed into an idea after I visited my poor hometown, and achieved by creating my charitable organization. I still want to better children’s lives and do social works in my future.
Supplement essay: I wrote about how my non-profit system and McDonald’s assembly line system all have pros and cons. My passion is to find the best workplace system that guarantees workers’ rights and enthusiasm, as well as maintains efficiency. ILR is the right school for me because it is where professors from interdisciplinary areas come and teach students knowledge on workplaces around the world.
Is the supplement ok??? I am so worried right now omggggg. Thanks!