chance me please?

<p>hi i'm an ED applicant and i just would like some feedback</p>

<p>GPA: unweighted- 3.5 but by graduation it should be around a 3.7
SAT: math- 630
C.R.- 660
writing-670
EC's include: Head Editor of Literary Magazine, 10 years of private German study, National Honor Society member, peer tutor, community service private tutor, member of Anti-Bias organization, member of band and chorus, and manager at the local Bagel store. I also used to play field hockey and was the defender, but due to medical reasons I couldn't play past my sophomore year.</p>

<p>Awards: I have won awards in German, Spanish, Art, and Writing. I also have won on a national level with the literary magazine with awards from Columbia, the National English Teachers Assn., and the American Scholastic Press Assn. </p>

<p>I also was involved in Summer Programs at yale and Wellesey both for writing.</p>