<p>I am applying to colleges this year, and as I put together applications, I am wondering if y'all would be willing to give me an honest assessment of what looks good and what doesn't. Is there anything I could improve (specifically, essay topics and the sorts) before January deadlines? Thanks for the help!</p>
<p>These are the schools I'm looking at:
U. of Virginia
U. of North Carolina - Chapel Hill
U. of Chicago
Duke University
Georgetown
Harvard
Yale
Princeton
Stanford
U. of Southern California
U. of Pennsylvania
Columbia University
Swarthmore</p>
<p>Objective:[ul]
[<em>] SAT I (breakdown): 2250 (730 CR, 800 M, 720 W (69 Subscore, 10 Essay))
[</em>] ACT: 36 (36 M, 36 E, 36 R, 36 S, 10 Essay)
[<em>] SAT II: 800 U.S. History, 800 Biology (Molecular), 790 Math II
[</em>] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0 (4.65 Weighted; Honors and AP courses given +1 points)
[<em>] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A (Top 2% out of class of 336)
[</em>] AP (place score in parenthesis): 5's on AP Biology, AP Calculus AB, AP English Language, AP U.S. History, AP U.S. Government
[<em>] Senior Year Course Load: AP Environmental Science, AP European History, AP English Literature, AP Physics C: Mechanics, Calculus II and III at college, 400-level Political Philosophy class at college, Independent Studies in Philosophy and in Leadership in Debate
[</em>] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): NMSF, Samsung American Legion Scholarship National Winner ($20,000; 9 National Winners selected from 100 State Winners selected from students participating in Boys and Girls State); some extracurricular awards (see below)
[/ul]Subjective:[ul]
[<em>] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Colorado Youth Advisory Council (11 and 12; Chair and former Vice-Chair; the council is the official youth advisory board to the state government; I coauthored legislation on teen suicide prevention with some of the other members of the council that the state passed; I've gotten quite involved in the suicide prevention work and am one of the lead members of the State Teen Sucide Prevention Task Force); Irish Dance (10 years; 20th in World, 5th in nation, solo dancing; World Champion, team dancing); Debate (9 to 12; Congressional Debate - Two-time National Semifinalist; Semifinalist Presiding Officer (only 8 in nation); Debate Captain); Student Council (9 to 12; Student Body President; Executive Treasurer; Class VP); Band/French Horn (9 to 11; State Marching Band Champions; Conductor in Teacher's Absence, 9 and 11; 1st Chair; a few honor bands).
[</em>] Summer Activities: Experimental Economics Research (Research Design, 40 hrs/wk for 4 weeks; only high schooler amongst college students and professors at Chapman University's Economic Science Institute; my experiment deals with economics, linguistics, and anthropology; paper to be published next year)
[<em>] Essays: Pretty decent, but I need thoughts... I have two 500-word ones... 1st is about my twin brother, how we've always been in tune with each other, how he is a sounding board for my ideas, how our discussions range from spontaneous singing of Also Sprach Zarathustra to enlightened political discussions... 2nd is about a leadership experience in teen suicide prevention; I was requested for testimony on a bill in front of a politically divided committee, and after my testimony, the committee voted unanimously to pass the bill; it reveals part of the motivation for my suicide prevention work as the depression my brother went through...
[</em>] Teacher Recommendations: I think they will be very good, though teachers from my school tend to not understand quite the caliber of recommendations needed for Ivy League schools, so I have my fingers crossed.
[<em>] Counselor Rec: We've connected a ton, so should be really good.
[</em>] Additional Rec: From my Youth Council facilitator; she thinks of me as a "centered and effective leader", so hopefully good.
[/ul]Other[ul]
[<em>] State (if domestic applicant): CO
[</em>] Country (if international applicant): USA
[<em>] School Type: Middle-sized Public Suburban
[</em>] Ethnicity: White
[<em>] Gender: Male
[</em>] Income Bracket: Between 100,000 and 150,000[/ul]</p>
<p>Thank you all so, so much!</p>